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写作总是无话可说or“废话”满篇?如何解决看这篇!

2021-01-29 16:05

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小编:环小影 471
摘要:在多年授课的过程中,我们经常发现,很多学生可能平时在家里写作的时候都感觉自己的状态不错,为什么考试的时候却会“掉链子”?每当归纳原因的时候,就会发现,最重要的原因就是在考试的时候想不出来很好的点。话说到一半就没话说了,或者是随便举例子论述。

  写作总是无话可说or“废话”满篇?如何解决看这篇!在多年授课的过程中,我们经常发现,很多学生可能平时在家里写作的时候都感觉自己的状态不错,为什么考试的时候却会“掉链子”?

  每当归纳原因的时候,就会发现,最重要的原因就是在考试的时候想不出来很好的点。话说到一半就没话说了,或者是随便举例子论述。

  今天,Shane老师将会跟大家分享如何思考才能“下笔如有神”,闲话少叙,我们直接上干货!

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Students are more interested in politics today than in the past.

  很多同学在拿到一套题的时候,总想说一句话“怎么还有这样的题???”

  如果还在想这个,那就太不专业了,在思考问题的时候可能就要花上三四分钟,到最后越想越糟糕,越写越难受。这就是很多小伙伴们最头疼的环节-写作前应该如何构思。

  Shane老师在这里给大家介绍一个“两边思考”的方法——一个正观点,一个反观点(最省时间,每个都说一个观点,一个当主体,一个当让步)

  首先,我们要果断选择。我们在思考的时候,当发现自己没有任何一方自己特别想选,或者特别迟疑时,就直接选择第一个观点当做自己的主观点。

  在这道题里就是“Students are more interested in politics today than in the past.” 然后再去想原因就会发现会顺畅很多。

  当选择了一个立场,但是还想不出来接下来该写什么时,我们就要反复重复。

  重复什么?就是在脑海里重复“现在的学生要比之前更加关注政治了,因为...” 每次给自己一个背景去思考,总比在大脑里空白的去想“到底有什么?”要强上许多,反复重复,一直到自己想到为止。

  终于,我们想好了一个topic sentence。“the policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community”

  之后我们要做的事情是想另一个观点的一个topic sentence,也就是学生不感兴趣政治,因为“学生们忙于学习,无暇关注政治的信息”

  这样我们这篇文章的龙骨就出来了——

  中心观点(thesis statement)

  I think students are becoming more and more interested in politics now as the world is changing so rapidly.

  第一个body 段:

  To begin with, the policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community.

  让步段:

  There is no denying that it is difficult for students, under the pressure of busy studies, to be distracted by political messages.

  我们在写topic sentence 的时候,必须要注意它和自己的中心论点有没有直接的因果关系。写完的句子必须double check!!!

  我们来试一试。“学生们现在更加感兴趣于政治了,因为现在的政治对留学生的影响非常大”如果这个逻辑算得上通顺,那这个topic sentence就过关了。

  为什么我会推荐“两边观点”这个方法?

  正是因为这样可以快速构建出两个观点。按照这个方法进行大量练习,练熟了之后,可以再加一个主体段观点,总体文章可以构成“两正一反”的类型,结构会清晰许多。

  纸上谈兵不如动手实践!大家可以尝试用这个龙骨练习一下这一篇文章,看看写作过程会不会流畅许多呢?

  以下是Shane老师写的例文,大家可以参考阅读~


  Scientific discoveries should be shared by all countries worldwide, and no government should keep them secret.The development of science and technology has always been one of the key elements of world development. Scientists often make new discoveries in their daily research, and whether these new discoveries should be shared with the world is a hotly debated topic. In my opinion, I believe that scientific discoveries should be shared around the world.

  First of all, sharing research results allows more scientists around the world to carry out further research. Many of the world's scientific discoveries are presented to the public for the first time in the form of papers. Because these technologies are only discovered by a scientist or a team, many of their drawbacks and potential dangers have not been thoroughly studied, which contains some areas that need to be improved. If a scientific achievement is shared in a timely manner, many scientists around the world can carry out more in-depth research on this topic, so that the scientific achievement can better serve everyone. There is no denying that sharing all research results can lead to some problems, such as some scientific findings with very significant safety implications. The dangers of finding and sharing a chemical or nuclear material that could be used to make a weapon are enormous, and could pose a threat to the entire world if it were acquired by malicious individuals. However, the scientific community, as well as governments around the world, are very cautious about the development of dangerous projects. Potentially destructive technologies have long been the core secrets of many countries. Furthermore, no matter the research result is a academic paper or in any other different forms, it can only be read by people with considerable academic level. Scientists in the world are generally more righteous, and what they are doing is always in a better way to create more welfare, so this issue does not need to worry too much. In general, sharing the scientific discoveries around the world would be very beneficial, because sharing can lead to further improvement of related technologies. Beyond that, the dangers and pitfalls of sharing technology are minimal.




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