《剑桥雅思8》写作解析 祁文婷 环球雅思学校 写作讲师
 

    剑八的小作文基本上囊括了单图题,多图题和流程题三大种题型。
    在这四篇中,第一套是饼图+表图的结合,着重于对静态数据的描述,第二套是饼图,第三套是流程图,第四套是线图,第二套和第四套则着重于动态数据的描述。

    Test3涉及到的流程图,主要关于水泥和混凝土的不同的制作过程。通过审图,不难看出这是两个东西的制作,再看图中的单词,凭借powder,heat,mixer,bags,water,sand等词大概写出图片内容,这里就有一个重点了,涉及到流程图的写法,烤鸭们在写作流程图的时候,虽说是无版可套,但是只要多加点插入语,使文章更加具有逻辑性和生动性,那么分数也不会很低,这里可以使用the first step, to start with, at the very first beginning, after that, the second step, afterwards, then等词。
    在写作过程中,烤鸭们需要注意,要通过对比将两幅图之间的关系或者区别表示出来。只要按照图表给出的顺序,掌握图的步骤,就会发现这篇流程不是很难写的。

范文写作:
The diagrams illustrate the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
At the beginning of the cement production, the limestone and the clay are put together to pass through a crusher. After that, the powder is produced and mixed by a mixer. Then, it would pass through a rotating heater to be heated.
Later, it would go through a grinder and the cement is done. Finally, the cement would be wrapped in bags.
It goes to the concrete production. It begins by mixing the cement, which takes up 15%, water, which occupying 10%, 25% sand and 50% gravel (small stones) together and then introduced them into a concrete mixer.
As can be seen, the cement production is in need of more processes, and the procedure is increasingly complex. Nevertheless, the concrete production needs more materials. There is an obvious difference between the two procedures. The cement mixer needs to be heated while the concrete mixer does not.