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托福写作常见的失分点汇总

2018-08-13

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摘要:

  托福写作中有一些易犯错误,将它列举出来,考生可以对照自己的写作看一看,有则改之无则加勉,不要为不必要的失误丢分。


  1.托福写作段落过长,不分段。一大段一大段的内容看起来冗长没有逻辑性,让人失去读下去的兴趣。适当分段,让文章整体看上去简洁明了。

  2.文章结构不平行,使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

  3.不知所云,不知道想要表达些什么:Many companies began using computers mouth.

  4.句子别扭,措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。

  5.不要使用缩写形式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。

  6.主语与动词一致问题,主语和动词在单复数方面要一致。

  7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets into college. For example, my friend in high school.句子没有主要主语或主要动词,因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。

  8.介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词,因而不能在它们前面添加介词。

  9.跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了,因而就没有必要再说出来。

  10.标点问题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号,尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

  11.单数/复数Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从单数变为复数,或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独使用,应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。

  12.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题 缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。

  13.代词指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。

  除此之外可能还有一些问题就不一一列举,希望考生在平时练习中就多注意,不要烦一些低级错误。


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