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雅思大作文常见开头写法汇总

2017-09-20

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摘要:

  实际上,雅思大作文的第一段是情景铺垫,专家建议考生在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论和解决什么问题及问题的背景。作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面:

  ①场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon。

  ②一些别人的观点(some people's opinion),这一部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生按照自己的情况来安排。

  ③个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。

  大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况:

  ①题目中包含了背景信息

  有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:

  主动语态<=>被动语态

  主谓宾<=>主系表

  某些近义词互换

  Example:

  At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?

  The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

  ②题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数:

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  把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。

  Example:

  International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

  The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture。其后加入考生个人观点即可。

  追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比。

  Example:

  International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

  Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

  ③题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息。这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。

  Example:

  The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

  In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

  另外,要提醒考生注意的是作文首段一定要避免出现语法错误,如果因为语法错误影响文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,最终大作文的得分自然不会很高。

  下面为各位考生整理了一些雅思大作文开头,供大家参考:

  1、利用形式主语做开头

  A、When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

  B、It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

  when it comes to 。。。句型后面加要阐述的topic

  it is commonly/widely thought that ....直接加现象 同there is 。。。句型

  2、以人做主语描述个人观点和态度

  A、Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.

  B、A large number of people tend to live under the * that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling.

  C、People differ in their attitudes towards failure. Faced with it, some of them can stand up to it, draw useful lessons from it and try hard to fulfill what they are determined to do. Others, however, lose heart and give in.

  3、现象本身作主语

  A、Whether a large family is a good thing or not is a very popular topic, which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well

  4、 开头万能公式一:名人名言

  有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!

  原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?

  经典句型:

  A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)

  It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

  更多经典句型:

  As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

  5、开头万能公式二:数字统计

  原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。

  原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:

  According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.

  看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:

  Honesty

  根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

  Travel by Bike

  根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

  Youth

  根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

  Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

  根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

  看了以上这些雅思大作文开头你是否有所感悟?这只是一小部分,更多的技巧和写法大家在备考的时候可以多多参照高分作文,看看别人是怎么写的,取其精华去其糟泊,争取让自己的写作水平有所提高。

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